Law School Personal Statement Guide
A strong personal statement is an integral part of a successful law school
application. Most law schools do not conduct applicant interviews, making
the essay your only chance to show the admissions committee that you are more
than a set of numbers. A good essay can make the difference between acceptance
and rejection at your top-choice school, so use the tips below to ensure yours
is a winner.
It is difficult to whip up a powerful personal statement in a day. Give yourself plenty of time to brainstorm, research, draft, and revise your essay by starting well in advance of your deadlines.
These essays require a great deal of self-analysis and introspection, and you may not be used to writing about yourself in this way. This is where brainstorming comes in. Take time to come up with a list of themes and ideas, regardless of how good or bad they may be. Then whittle down the list based on how much support or material you
have for each one.
Tell a Story
Your personal statement should read like a narrative, and explain what has
brought you to apply for admission to law school. Do not merely repeat the
information that can be found on your résumé. Instead, expand
on why certain experiences were meaningful to you or what you learned from
them, being sure to avoid clichés.
It is critical that the narrative you develop is cohesive; the experiences,
activities and interests you discuss should all be connected by a common theme,
even if this means leaving out other accomplishments that are unrelated. Like
most narratives, it should have a beginning, middle, and an end that provides
a resolution to your story and presents who you are now as an applicant.
Tailor all of your personal statements to the schools to which you are applying
– and not just by replacing the school name. Do your homework so that
you can include real reasons why you would like to attend each school. These
can range from well-respected legal clinics and faculty expertise, to unique
joint programs and internship opportunities.
It’s not enough to write, “I am applying to [school name] because
I want to receive the best possible legal education.” That kind of statement
could apply to almost any university. In order to tailor your statement well,
you need to identify something about each school that truly stands out. Ask
yourself what you can get from an education at that school that you can’t
get anywhere else.
Lawyers work with complex language every single day; it’s their primary
tool, so you need to demonstrate you candle handle it with care and precision.
That means not only writing a personal statement that is thoughtful and persuasive,
but that is entirely free of errors.
Triple-check your work, and have a fresh set of eyes review it, too. We’re
often blind to our own mistakes, and your spell check won’t fix things
like unclear sentences or confused homophones. Put your statement aside for
a few days between rounds of editing so you can look at it dispassionately
and more easily spot sections that require changes.
Show, Don't Tell
The cardinal rule of good writing applies to your admissions essay. Rather
than saying that you are a dedicated student, can you demonstrate that through
describing your academic accomplishments? Can you show your commitment to
a cause through a history of involvement as a volunteer?
Direct statements about your character (“I am extremely hard-working”)
come off as pompous and unconvincing. Avoid these assertions at all cost,
and back up any claims with evidence so they will carry more weight.
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